Hiya, thesleeve o/
Haven't quite gotten around to reading through your character (sorry for that
) but for general tips there's probably the Wiki to relate to, especially the tips-pages linked below:
http://lt-rekt.wikidot.com/tips-for-new-players
http://lt-rekt.wikidot.com/tips-on-writing-actions
That should be a rather good start for beginning.
Aside from that, when you get to playing, remind the other players to perhaps go over your actions again. Most of us made the same mistake with the multi-roll rules when you attack more often than your stats actually allow at first. No need to be ashamed about that.
For the part with the Role-playing...only a quite small part of the playerbase has actual experiences with real RP. So don't sweat it!
And in general, usually there are a few players on the IRC channel. If there's questions or something, you'll find someone there!
Apparently, sometimes stuff might happen.
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