Just a quick list of what needs to be added/updated:
1. You need purchases.
As I recall, you already said you wanted full cyborg bodyparts. That's six bodyparts (head, arm x2, leg x2, torso), so 6000 creds. This means you have 6500 left over. You can arrange them like this:
- 6000 (full cyborg)
- assault rifle
- plasma rifle
etc.
You get three free infantry weapons because you have +0 strength. (+2 strength will upgrade you to four free infantry weapons, when/if you get there.) You'll probably want conventional weapons.
Handy links:
Standard infantry items (you get three free conventional weapons)
Augments
Combat drugs
2. Alien Species Info
I need info on your alien species, using the alien species page here.
http://rekt.wikidot.com/custom-aliens
You're more or less the test run for player-made alien species, so I'm tweaking the wiki rules to give you a bit of a leg up while we experiment a little:
- You need at least 80 points of cons/negatives.
- You need enough pros to bring your total (pros + cons) to somewhere between -10 and -30.
You can format this like so:
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[spoiler]SPECIES: Flying Space Monkey
DESCRIPTION: A monkey from the depths of space. It flies. It has three tails. It likes to jump around and is more often than not quite insane. They hail from the planet Cruton (etc etc etc)
PROS:
- Monkey
- Cute
- Flies
- Space
CONS:
- Stupid
- Insane
- Dangerous
- Talks at movie theaters
[/spoiler]
Just to be clear: Your alien can have other features that aren't listed, but these aren't allowed to help/hinder the alien and must be purely cosmetic. (tall feathers, saggy jowls, non-sharp beak, side-blinking eyes, fin on the back, etc) You can list these in your description.
3. Reason your character got REKT
In your case, as you aren't starting as REKT, you don't
technically need to fill this out. If you do, though, canon is already that not many REKT members died during the fight at Fuhodo Station's hangar. We take backstories/character development seriously here, so it's something you should tweak.
Also, a point of confusion: You seem to describe your character as a martial arts expert, but you don't actually have any ability to fight in melee. Your Athletics (Strength + Agility) is only +1, and your Acrobatics (Agility + Speed) is only +0.
After these things are fixed, I'll look over your post again and accept your character.
As soon as that's done, I'll get Alephan put on the wiki and add her to Taiya's database (speaking of which, you ought to join IRC at some point. The link is in my sig). Then I'll give you a link to the discord server where the other two new characters are doing their pre-mission-insertion RP.
You don't need to rush, but it does need to be done in the next couple of weeks: after a certain point in this mission, new player characters won't be able to join, and this character in particular (thanks to various in-universe reasons) won't be able to join anymore - the player characters will be eventually leaving this station and heading out into the unknown, far from civilization. Just a heads up.