Soooo this is kinda my first attempt at a story and it might be a little rough. Grammar isn't great and I just have no idea how to space paragraphs. However I was just way to excited to get feedback to figure out those things and polish it. If you really want to comment on grammar okay but I'm more wondering if I'm any good at writing in general. You guys are awesome and if you read it thank you so much! Comments mean a lot

Edit: As you can tell the dwarves are the important thing here