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A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2018 6:15 am
by Hyperion
A Buggered Wreath of Quartz did hold the back of power, a sway to hind, a man too few, and so came forth a Bedraggled corpse.

Supine in the midst of all chaos and brine, a reach of mirth did affect the swine. Swine have taken to the floral front, companions and compassion for the state of Now and Nowhere.

A good few men and far too few women are writing the same thing, a little verse of what may be. So say I, the eye of the world which could be. "Grow and make a great corpus for the future! The dawn of eternity is here, and y'all spoil yourselves for a sucrine moment of time, when before you lays the love of creation."

Animals: Procedural. So is the gift of Hyperion to Nyx, a couple people, a couple friends. Blossoming and growing into a gene which carries itself upon the banks of time to a procedural future, upon which the wreath of the bedraggled quartz lies. Be now not sure, be now not aware of what may be, a hope for enlightened glory, enlightened promise of that promise and privilege to be among the greatest and most important gift of Hyperion to Nyx. A true love. A true friend. A true gift from narrative to chaos.

Amen.

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:11 am
by FormalMoss
I like how quartz rhymes with corpse.
😀
It reads like a poem, except in verse.
Like a prophecy, but a lovely insight from the mind of Hyperion..
.. I lool forward to re-reading it a few times more :)

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:53 am
by Cornflakes_91
FormalMoss wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:11 am
I like how quartz rhymes with corpse.
😀
things you dont notice as non native speaker ._.
(Especially as quartz isnt written any different in german)

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:09 am
by FormalMoss
Cornflakes_91 wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:53 am
FormalMoss wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:11 am
I like how quartz rhymes with corpse.
😀
things you dont notice as non native speaker ._.
(Especially as quartz isnt written any different in german)
.. and my sleep-addled brain read it as corpse.. and my eyes rolled into my head and asked "wtf brain!?"

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:28 am
by Dinosawer
...but quartz doesn't rhyme with corpse, quartz has a t sound and corpse a p sound. :?

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:33 am
by Cornflakes_91
Dinosawer wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:28 am
...but quartz doesn't rhyme with corpse, quartz has a t sound and corpse a p sound. :?
"kuor *mumble* ss"
:ghost:

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:35 am
by Dinosawer
Sure Cornflates

:ghost:

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:36 am
by Cornflakes_91
Dinosawer wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:35 am
Sure Cornflates

:ghost:
i think you are cornflating me with someone else

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 9:27 am
by Talvieno
I don't actually understand Hyperion's story, and I've read it a few times trying to figure it out. It sounds nice - the words go together like a sort of poetry - but the meaning is difficult to discern, and I feel like that may be how it was intended.

Re: A Buggered Wreath

Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2018 11:39 am
by FormalMoss
Talvieno wrote: ↑
Wed Feb 14, 2018 9:27 am
I don't actually understand Hyperion's story, and I've read it a few times trying to figure it out. It sounds nice - the words go together like a sort of poetry - but the meaning is difficult to discern, and I feel like that may be how it was intended.
Just like the red Ford Transit van, matey.