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Wed Apr 29, 2015 12:29 pm
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Re: Comments on Insignificant life
Um... which story?
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 12:44 pm
#3
Re: Comments on Insignificant life
posted it now, sorry for the delayDinosawer wrote:Um... which story?
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Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:06 pm
#4
Re: Comments on Insignificant life
It might help to place a link to your writing, ie:
Click here to read Insignificant Life
Kudos to Talvieno for the above
Click here to read Insignificant Life
Kudos to Talvieno for the above
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 12:05 am
#5
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Ow, great idea. Thanks for the link.
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 7:10 am
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I am actually looking for words. I cannot say nice story, because it definetly made me look nervously at the sky at each cloud passing by. Tell me Tsernobyl - with such a name, did you have to add more catastrophes?
OK, let's settle for good story!
It ends with a cliffhanger, so let's hope the Chapter 2 (the "writer" will have protected our heros) will tell us who the girl was, and if the other actually did loose a man on his watch!
Thanks for the good read!
OK, let's settle for good story!
It ends with a cliffhanger, so let's hope the Chapter 2 (the "writer" will have protected our heros) will tell us who the girl was, and if the other actually did loose a man on his watch!
Thanks for the good read!
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 7:32 am
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Re: Comments on Insignificant life
Thanks a lot. I've been trying to improve on my writing the last year, read a lot about it and had quite some excercise. I feel confident that I can write this story the way I want, better than my previous attempt. The ending and major events will be very different, this is not a rewrite of "A short story about war" So there is no point in reading that for spoilers.
I'm glad you like it, gives me one more reason to write on.
I'm glad you like it, gives me one more reason to write on.