That was good

I don't get it

Talvieno wrote: On an unrelated note, I had a bit of a medical scare last night, but I'm okay now... just tired and very shaken up.

Hope you get well soon

I obliviously passed over that Tal! I hope you are okay now!! Wouldn't hurt to get a doctor do a general check for the sake of it, though. /Lum sends good vibes.

Dinosawer, if we are to explain it, it wouldn't be the same

I'm okay, guys. I had some something that acted like a severe allergic reaction - the closest I can find is this, but that list doesn't include intense chest pain, difficulty breathing, or esophageal spasms. It cleared up late this morning, at least.

Good to know that you're alright.

Surprise.

Hooray!!!

I'm happy there's a new installment. I really enjoyed reading the new installment.

But...

You CLIFFED it.

Again.

Don't mind me. I'll just die a slow, painful death from the suspension.

Ok, but in all seriousness: Great writing. Thanks for posting. I don't really mind the cliffs. They're kind of expected in light novels/forum stories.
I get the sense that the quality of your writing has improved since you started. That or I'm too big of a fanboy at this point to notice/care. I'm leaning towards the first.

Woohoo , new chapter!!

I agree with Jazeziah, you keep getting better at this.

I must wait until tomorrow to read it because today I'm flying back to Spain to my yearly visit to my parents, but man, I'm glad the waiting came to an end! Looking forward to read it!!!

Thanks for not abandoning us!

Passionant, spannend, (Insert appropriate word in English)!
Well, the "small choice" was obviously a "bad choice". Never attack a superior techniology unless you know enough about their blind spots.
Well, good luck guys!

I'm glad you guys like it! I was never planning on abandoning it - things just got in the way and I had a lot on my hands. That and a small degree of burnout.

CSE - I think the word you were looking for is "exciting", which I'm very pleased to hear associated with my work.

Jazehiah - never fear. I don't intend to cliff it for long. I actually intend to get the next chapter out tomorrow, and then follow with another a couple days after that. They'll probably slow at that point, just so I don't overwork myself. (I put a lot of work into these - more so after Lum helped me realize that I wasn't proofreading well enough.)

Why yes, my shipping goggles are still on, thank you for asking.

Idunno wrote:

Spoiler:      SHOW

The more Hraden thinks of Sofie as a real person, the larger the chance that the Sofie/Hraden ship will sail straight and true.

Why yes, my shipping goggles are still on, thank you for asking.

I meant to post yesterday (or the day before), but I've been fighting a variety of viruses and malware that I quite stupidly installed in a panic when the program I've been using to track (and therefore boost) my productivity stopped working. (it updated itself and wanted me to get a licensed version. ) I managed to get everything cleaned up at least, but it took a lot of hair-pulling. I couldn't even access the Internet for a while. (also, it amusingly coincided with our ISP going down for about eight hours... never get Windstream. )

Post should be coming out today, unless something goes wrong.

Idunno wrote:

Spoiler:      SHOW

The more Hraden thinks of Sofie as a real person, the larger the chance that the Sofie/Hraden ship will sail straight and true.

Why yes, my shipping goggles are still on, thank you for asking.