Sorry about not posting every week as I promised, between other writing , school, school accreditation, sports, and social life it isn't often I find the time to just sit down and write. But here's chapter 3 Chapter four should soon follow of not next Sumday then the Sunday after. Thank you. "Welcom...

This is the way I see it. To me cloaking ‘bends light around the ship, because the enemy can see behind the ship, and because the light does not directly hit on the ship, it creates an optical illusion. Cloaking also silences your ship’s device so I can not show up on most (notice: most) sensors. Th...

since I’m really in favor of awesome cloaking, I think a cloaking device more like this: A cloaking device uses power to ‘bend’ light away from the ship, in this way the light doesn’t direct itself on the ship but because the light bends around the ship you see behind the ship making it appear (thro...

For those reading this I'm going to continue this story on a different topi to keep it organized. Next time I post the story topic I'm going to give myself room for 3 chapters. Anyways check out the next part of my story if you haven't already, critic it, comment on it. I'm well on my in part 3

Just to clarify, I plan on posting every week or so. Unfortunately, school plus living in China may complicate things. Luckily I have Chinese New Year coming up. It lasts two weeks and I have nothing planned, so lots of writing time. But mainly I'm going to push myself to write once a week.

I like what you've wrote so far. One big thing that would improve the readability is to put in some paragraph breaks. Otherwise I suggest reading it over once or twice to look for some of the smaller mistakes, e.g. missing/wrong words Keep writing. Thanks a lot for your comments. I will take all yo...

Finally, I finished. Yeah I know I promised every week, but the week before holiday I was busy and during holiday I was sleeping. I promise now I will return to my promised schedule. now for a few notes about my story: Any weird words are in Chinese Pin-Yin as most of the story occurs in a Chinese s...

Here is my part one of my story. Constructive criticism is gladly accepted: There was a large clang as the mug hit the floor; the floor was covered in coffee, but this was the least of my concerns. Right in the headlines of "Galaxy news" it read "local planet glassed by angry Aergon faction!" The pl...

I believe it should be something like this Formation Defensive- Fortify- Your fleet organizes in the most effective way (that it can calculate) Defend (ship X) Your ships make the most effective formation to defend ship x Counter- Your ships focus on counterattacking the enemy Offensive Strafe- Your...

I'm reading Lord of the Rings again. Man you can't beat the series

Apparently, my 1 generation old 21.5 imac doesn't seem to have a mini-DVI input. Anyone know of any useful, non-apple store, firebolt or usb 2.0, 21.5 inch or similar sized monitors.

I really enjoy your dev logs and really hope that one day I can learn how to program like you, any tips?

For me late night is the time when I'm most creative (it is night here in China.) I want to give my crazy opinion on this one I think late night is my best time because it is after my best, and largest meal so I have all my energy an nutrients my brain needs for creative thinking. Because a lot of p...

Maybe I should be clearer, I did post this first thing this morning. By implementing a voting system the community would be able to 'vote up' a subject they like, rather than relying on the amount of posts in a certain thread. I don't comment on every idea that I like for example. Most of what I re...

I shudder the day when fighters are 200 meters long. Probably not what you meant though